Beach sounding song for girlfriend. Need some constructive critisim. Thdx

JerryD · Apr 3, 2011

I woke up yesterday and wrote this for my girlfriend. I recorded yesterday afternoon. I want it to sound better for her. I plan on recording this soon. Feel free to tear this apart so I can improve it. Thanks for any suggestions.

All of the Peoples Down by the SEA Beachy Sound Version by Jerry "Daniel" Padgett on Sutros, a place for musicians.

RAMI · Apr 3, 2011

Jerry, put down the bottle, dude. Your link doesn't work.

JerryD · Apr 3, 2011

JerryD · Apr 3, 2011

Can't stop drinking now...I'm on a roll

sutros.com/songs/14258

This link should work.