Hey Frenchc
I'm listening now. Maybe its just me but the "feel" seems a little hard to find - a different rhythm than I'm used to. I like the guitar a lot - sounds cool - I love melodic electric guitar stuff. Drums sound good, too.
Pretty good vocals - I'm not a fan of the talking thing within the song, but that's my opinion.
OK, when the distorted guitar comes in, the tone is kinda bad for me - sounds "cheap" and "thin", especially compared to the cleaner tone.
You do the all-to-cliche' screaming type thing at the end, too - which is cool, but I get kinda tired after every band in this genre does it on every song. My 2 cents. I have about no room to talk, though - all my stuff does the same things over and over, and it all mimmics the genre that I write to. Perhaps I should take my own advice.
Pretty cool song, overall, though. Tame that distorted guitar and you'd have it. I said a lot of negative things, but I really enjoyed listening to it. I am listening on really crappy computer speakers, though - so take whatever I say with a grain of salt.
-Brian