yeah man, theres room for improvement, but there always is. For me and everyone here. You'll just keep getting better and better at it!
I agree with people though, make a site that is either w/ dummy text, or about your desighn services, sarcasm isnt very professional.
and the music, though its sort of fun, would probly need to go.
if you want to show off the player that you desighned, then record yourself saything somthing like "welcome to ______, feel free to check out the ___section, (and then maybe contact info), maybe alittle backround info, and contact info.
the pictures are the same as the music, make things like your own logo, and as your portfolio builds, the other artists logos with links to their site.
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your deffidentally are on the right page man, keep it up, and remember: simplicty is very important to keep in mind, its appealing, quick, clean, professional, and undistracting. Brightening up your site, will help, along with
a skip into button.
Make an into with you logo appearing (and make the into alittle shorter),
that would be cool.
Best regards man!
and great job, i hope you take what i said to consideration!
-Hrwmusic