Good job on this tune Mr Rabbit. I would only suggest a bit more mids and less highs on the "melody" guitar. A fatter patch or different pickup maybe.
The added guitar by Dogman does fill it out nicely. Vocals are super good - sound just like the orig.... I like the snare, but having played with a Linn Drum in the 80's I know where they are coming from.....
Good Job.....
The mix sounds really nice. The only thing I'd mention is that the guitars sound a little digital or DI'd. When I have this sound (mostly 'coz of DI'ing), I just double with a much heavier tone and just balance them out and throw on some verb.