3 New Hip Hop Tracks....

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you willing to die

I like the song , I just found the website .I was wondering where you was from?I am a upcoming artist in the making.
 
listened to the 1st song (u willin)

the beat was cool man i like it.

it might be cooler if you matched the kick wiith the bass guitars phrasing and the end of every loop. like this

bass.. buh, buh, buuuuhhhm
kick.. ki,,,,ki,,,,kick______

it'd probably compliment the lyricists phrasing better too.

i liked it though. good work.

peace.
 
Peeping "I remember when"

This beat is nice... sample is laced nicely... This a decent hook...

Flow come in nicely, vocals sound a bit lacking in depth to me. The main vocal track sounds really dry to me, could be these speakers though...

This is a nice hook...

The guitar sample gets a bit tired midway through, it needs to be chopped and changed up a bit...

Overall, this a nice track. Keep doing it.
 
hey

Damn...... Im not one to hide my feelings for the sake of upholding a critics etiquette, so once again........DAMN your beats are realy well formated and the hooks do all the tracks justice...As for the artist he is good but i agree on remmember when he was lacking depth...This is my opinion on that track he might need a few more metaphores to compliment the soft but complex beat..But thats just me Overall Damn good job...keep it up!
 
Thanks for the positive feedback...
I'll take everything you all have said into consideration, that's the whole purpose for posting here...

xfinsterx,
what song where you referring to...
 
i'm originally from queens and a follower of hip hop since the day's of the furious four plus one more . so i feel i can rate your song and production as being tight . ;) one
 
a fellow QU native.... that's whats up.....
good looking...
 
cartel said:
Thanks for the positive feedback...
I'll take everything you all have said into consideration, that's the whole purpose for posting here...

xfinsterx,
what song where you referring to...
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the first track "U WILLIN TO DIE" i believe...
 
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