i like the song & the voice even more. mix sounds good to me. some comments (i've listened to the updated mix):
- the intro is cool
- e-guitar sound is nice & direct in my face
- i would mix the a-guitar part a bit softer, now its roughly same level as the "hard part", but i think it would be cooler for the long-term dynamics to have a contrast here.
- vocals could be a bit more present,
ESP. since your voice is that good. maybe during the heavy e-guitar parts, the guitar has also a bit too much mids compared to your voice. try to spend some very highs with the EQ. if they get silibant, try a multiband compressor with short attack & compress 6khz and up in advance.
- the a-guitar catches some of my focous, maybe they have too much highs. try to highcut @ ~16-17khz & find a sweet EQ-spot somewhere else and give it 2-3dB
- the solo guitar is nice.
all in all this is a good mix, great musical performance & a wonderful song. my mixing-comments are on a high level.