
PhilGood
Juice box hero
baekgaard said:Matt (thehook),
First, let me say I didn't listen to your music. I actually tried, but got a server error due to some network problems, and didn't go back to check again. It may work now; I don't know. But it means I am not able to offer your any intelligent advice based on your question and your clip.
Second, you got some pretty direct comments on your performance. Not what you asked for, but it is wise always to be prepared for that kind of feedback on a public forum. And I believe that all, that gave comments, did so because they felt the issues they adressed were as important as what you were asking for comments on. I'm sure they thought it would be a better "return of investment" if you work with your tuning, voice, etc.
In the "real world" you may never get such comments. People just think it, tell it to their friends, and don't show up next time. The good thing about the net is that you can actually get these honest and usually unbiased comments, you can take action and improve if needed. (Note: I said _if_ -- I still didn't hear your clip).
From reading the thread, it seems your reply to those offering you feedback you didn't like, has been to attack them and accuse them of all sorts of things -- such as being "mr. 20 seconds" or "suffering from a short mans syndrome" and the like. Especially your last post. There is hardly any evidence to prove those claims. On the other hand, people commenting here did so based on your own performance.
I honestly don't think your attitude will help you get the comments and advice you are looking for and maybe need. I don't believe people at attacking you or trying to put you down. But I'm pretty sure many people will now refrain from giving comments and advice, based on your reactions.
If you think I'm now also attacking you or trying to put you down, think again. I'm just trying to help you see what happened in this thread in a slightly different light from what you seem to have perceived.
Being 17 with a good drive and a nice sounding voice and musical talent is good. And it is better for you to rectify any problems now than in 10 years, when it will be much more difficult to readjust from bad vocal habits.
Just a friendly advice from someone being engaged online and following discussions since the early days of the Usenet back in 1984...
[Apologies for my language -- English is not my native tongue.]
-- Per.
I think that was well said! If you can't handle an honest critique, you shouldn't be in this business. The best musicians are the ones who listen, deal with it and then do their best to improve.
Its the ones who are delusional who never improve and can't understand why they never went anywhere.
I have an old friend who thought he was a great songwriter and vocalist. He was half right. He was a terrible vocalist and it took a few recordings of his own voice played back to him before he realized he couldn't sing very well. He was an OUTSTANDING songwriter, though and got a stint in Nashville as a songwriter and has had a few well known artisits pick up his tunes.
I HAVE listened to the tune and found you have good songwriting and lyrical skills, but your vocals remind me of that tune: hmmm...hmmm "once there was this girl who..." (That's really how the song goes!)
Your melody is based essentially on ONE note. Did you notice this? It can work if that's what you intended and its not an attack on you, but really, how many songs succeed with a melody that hinges around one note?
You can't ask for an honest opinion and then retaliate when the result isn't what you hoped for.
You asked.