We Have A New Song Up For Critque/Feedback

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Nice song. Good arrangement and played well. I personally don't care for the drum sound. Sounds way too roomy. The bass drum sounds like someones hitting a box with a rubber mallet. I'm hearing the snare more on the right too. Reverb-y drums go well in this song, but I think they sound too far back in the mix. The chorus guitars lean way too much to the right and then end abruptly when the verse comes back in - especially during the quiet little break in the middle before the solo. It is a nice song though. Jusy my 2 cents.
 
and your two cents is worth more too us than anything m8...thanks for the comments and we,ll try this to see what happens...
 
Nice tune....I'll have to agree with Greg and his comments and you might want to check the intonation of the lead guitar but, it was a very enjoyable listen, you guys are coming right along, the songs keep getting better and the writing keeps getting better although there was nothing wrong with the earlier stuff....keep up the good work guys!!!
 
jpw23 said:
Nice tune....I'll have to agree with Greg and his comments and you might want to check the intonation of the lead guitar but, it was a very enjoyable listen, you guys are coming right along, the songs keep getting better and the writing keeps getting better although there was nothing wrong with the earlier stuff....keep up the good work guys!!!
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I tend to agree, the lead guitar in my left speaker was out of tune just a hair in the intro.

Bring the bass out a bit more. Seems to be lacking real punch and clarity.

Nice song overall...
 
Greg_L said:
Nice song. Good arrangement and played well. I personally don't care for the drum sound. Sounds way too roomy. The bass drum sounds like someones hitting a box with a rubber mallet. I'm hearing the snare more on the right too. Reverb-y drums go well in this song, but I think they sound too far back in the mix. The chorus guitars lean way too much to the right and then end abruptly when the verse comes back in - especially during the quiet little break in the middle before the solo. It is a nice song though. Jusy my 2 cents.
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I think Greg nailed it, and the comments about the guitar being out of tune. That jumped out at me right away. Drum sound needs work. The bass head sounds almost loose. Actual drumming is fine, just the sound.

And being a bass player, WHERE'S THE BASS? OK, never mind me, I'm biased. :p

If you're going to have the guitars cut out, have them die out instead, you know, hold the chord until it naturally drops off.

The vocals are freakin' awesome, though! Really nice vocal work.

This is the kind of recording that gets guys contracts. The talent and the song are obviously there, it just needs someone to bring it out. Keep at it.
 
Another excellent effort fellows!
I couldn't hear aprob wit the intro but I'm not know for anything approaching even imperfect pitch.
Plenty of guitar happenings & intertwinings including the backward bit, to keep me happy.
The singing & harmonies are spot on. Again a sense of impending doom or darkness despite the light from the sunny voices.
The bass is indistinct if present & needs a little definition.
Top job.
 
thanks guys much apreciated we will try a few of these things see how it sounds..always better to get someones opinion that is more advanced in using pc music programs
 
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