tried mixing another song check it out

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it is the same beat as the calm him down song with a little remix, but the rap and hook is totally different. peep it out and let me know what needs to be done to this mix to make it sound better.

i respect all honesty so let me know what ever may be the problem, the lyrics what ever just holla back. the song is called hit em.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/loueazy/singles
 
Here are some thoughts:

rap & hip-hop I hear mostly the stuff that's in high rotation - I don't


Calm him down:
I'm not sure what your shooting for here, but some of the background sounds just aren't working. THe intro is confusing, it just doesn't come together, and the bullfrog sound doesn;t work for me


Hit Em
This is good - the words are good the rapper's voice and delivery are really ... present. The background sounds are a little less confusing than the previous song, and the bullfrog sound isn't quite as distracting. The sound is maybe a little thin.


I wish
Well, since this title already exists, you need to play with it a little - Its alright to pay tribute, but in addition to it being confusing (people will think they are getting a different song) you might face some copyright issues. Again, the sound is a bit thin. Unfortunately, although I'm in a position to tell you what just not hitting me right, I don;'t have enuf knowledge to make useful suggestions to you. :(

Who is rapping, is that you? I like the raps & the delivery, great prescence

Layla

ps: Maybe yoiu need access to some different sounds? I think you might need to expand your vocabulary on the beats.
 
i love that

damn, that is what i've been waiting for. i appreciate you taking some time to critique my songs. yes, that is me rapping. i'm a humble mc, and i appreciate all advice, negative or positive, just as long as it's tasteful. i will definitely take everything you have said into consideration. when ever i find time to redo the songs i hope you'll be back to peep em.

much love, phyzical therapy
 
where are the lyrics. Nice down south track. cant really comment too much on the mix but. Baller sounds alot cleaner the the other two
 
Hi_D_Ho_Man

thanks. i didn't write anything to baller yet, i'm going to change baller up a little, due to the advice up above.
 
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