Tempered Dawn, pop tune

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This is my old pop tune. Made with Sonar x1.
Funny IMO. I forgot to put hyper link so copy the link text and paste it to address place on browser and press enter.

 
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I could use more low end and less of the lead synths, particularly that first one. As an instrumental it didn't hold my interest all the way through. Give it vocals.
 
Thanks for the comment. I really cannot sing. My mixed at that time were often very bad. And that is not my favorites. Maybe later I can send better ones. My mixing ain't great today either.
 
Overall sound on the synths was fine.

Drums are way back in the mix. The kick/snare could really drive this thing if they weren't getting covered.

I agree with Robus - as an instrumental it needs something added here and there to keep up interest. Change up instruments, etc.
 
Hey man.
I added the SC player for you. Hope that's OK.
If you wrap the link in [ SOUNDCLOUD ] LINK [ /SOUNDCLOUD ] without spaces, it will embed like that.

Mostly agree with the other guys. The drums are too soft and muffled to really drive the thing.
At the intro I assume you had a filter on that was going to gradually release, but it never did.

The melodies you have there are nice but I hear them as more of a backing pad than a lead.

Listen to 'Speed of Life' or 'Sound and Vision' by David Bowie.
Even though it's not the same kind of music, notice there's always a certain thing that seems like it's meant to take your attention.
One lead instrument hands off to another, to another, and so forth.
[bowiefan]Actually. Just listen to the whole album because it's great. :) [/bowiefan]
 
Thank you guys for ideas and suggestions
And for the player. I will try to make changes.
 
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