hey Pete, if you decide you want to mess with this some more, get in touch.. I could add loads of stuff to this.. Maybe give it a 'Cowboys from Hell' feel..
very cool, i see a clint eastwood type guy riding out of town, after he got his vengence on the bad guy's who killed his family. hat lowered to just above his eye's, head down, mexican blanket on his back, gun shot wound to his left shoulder, sun is setting, it's dusty and dry..........roll credit's.
I'm picturing Clint Eastwood staring down a long and dusty street. There is a gunfighter at the end of the street lying on the ground, apparently dead from the gunfight that just ensued...Clint has that glimmer in his eye and his teeth are showing ... He turns and walks away ...
Cool stuff! Totally picturesque...maybe composing movie scores may be in your future?
Only feedback I may have may be the drum sound, but that is all subjective.