Some New track

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Thirst

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ok I recorded 2 of the 3 verses and I didnt add the hook to this yet, its called " pumpin blood " I didnt do the hook becuz I wasnt sure about my voice Im mad sick and my nose is stuffed up but I get bored and need to do music lol.. Anyway heres the link to the song

http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=789914&q=Hi


link to page " pumpin blood "

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/thirst1music.htm


Let me know what u think, if its positive then ill finish the song, as of now im not sure.. thanks alot and hope you enjoy..
 
I liked that.

Good choice in beat and a a good flow as always.

Finish it.
 
im feeling the energy in this.

Sounds fine to me.

I like the style and the charisma
 
Man that was off the chain. Good work. Are those all sampled sounds?
 
Phat beat it sounds, like an eminem beat
Good rap too
good work
 
What's up Thirst :cool:


The track is cool, played it a couple of times.

Originally posted by Thirst I didnt do the hook becuz I wasnt sure about my voice Im mad sick and my nose is stuffed up but I get bored and need to do music lol..
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If you ask me, you've already made a nice hook for the song that would sound even better if you make a few changes.

At around 01:39.0 the part where you said "*******cities a place, I could bury yah there, with a snap from my fingers you and your crew disappaer.

Those words would sound great doubled in (((Stereo))) far Left and far Right. Then the other words that follow could be the same as it is in the center.

I did not hear the first word clear, but the way you used your voice when you said "*******cities a place, I could bury yah there" sounds smooth and nice. If you could keep your voice sounding smooth like that up to the word "disappear", then let the other part come in as is without sounding smooth but hardcore, you now have a hot hook. It could be an 8 measure loop, in other words let it play twice.

Keep looping the last part around and around and you'll see what I'm saying man.


Peace.

RINGO
 
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