Some feedback please: "Last Forever"

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Id greatly appreciate some feedback from anyone on my song, Last Forever....its a demo track my new band just threw together and that I recorded on my Korg D1600...any advice as long as its constructive would be appreciated....thanks

SONGS AT:
www.purevolume.com/gerrycorsi
its the first one on there!
 
Nothing stands out at the moment. Just wanted to let you know I listened, but on a crappy system. I will listen on a better system later, and if I have any decent advice, I'll try and give it....
Ed
 
Thanks man...yea get back to me when you get a chance on a better system...! :o
 
"Last Forever" definitely sounds thrown together compared to your other songs, but one consistent problem really sticks out to me: the vocals tend to be pitchy and uneven throughout. And I'm probably not the right person to talk about the mix, but it sounds really "in your face" where everything sorta feels like it's at the same level. The crashes at the end are a bit too much for my tastes. Good luck and let's hear it again when you've got something more complete.
 
What are you aiming for? It says dance remix but the only dance-part I can find in it is the synth line, which is not that dancy either.

Staying away from trying to put it in a style-group kindoff thing, I have to say, you need some singing lessons.

Also, that snare sounds unusually stereo.
 
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