nickg
Lets.hit.record!
So I've been working on a few songs and I thought id try my first post in this catagory...
Its unfinished, and in worktape/concept form. I use guitar for songwriting purposes, I can't play to click! and yes.. I know it's out of tune and sucks
"Senseless Touch"
(Verse1)
I woke up this morning
and I looked up to the mirror
When I opened my eyes,
I saw, I saw no reflection
I have spoken to you,
but your eyes just see right through me
Reach out to me hand, you can touch,
but you can not feel me
(Pre-Chorus)
I've been waiting for days
I've been counting them minutes and hours
Each moment that passes I can feel out souls growing further
(Chorus)
Where have we gone
I miss you but you know I can't stay
Can you see me?
My reflection is lost,
My soul's fading away.
Corny, slow, too common of storyline? I'm down for any suggestions on the lyrics or vocals. Comments, suggestions, & snide remarks are welcome!
Its unfinished, and in worktape/concept form. I use guitar for songwriting purposes, I can't play to click! and yes.. I know it's out of tune and sucks
"Senseless Touch"
(Verse1)
I woke up this morning
and I looked up to the mirror
When I opened my eyes,
I saw, I saw no reflection
I have spoken to you,
but your eyes just see right through me
Reach out to me hand, you can touch,
but you can not feel me
(Pre-Chorus)
I've been waiting for days
I've been counting them minutes and hours
Each moment that passes I can feel out souls growing further
(Chorus)
Where have we gone
I miss you but you know I can't stay
Can you see me?
My reflection is lost,
My soul's fading away.
Corny, slow, too common of storyline? I'm down for any suggestions on the lyrics or vocals. Comments, suggestions, & snide remarks are welcome!