I was reading those lyrics and got more of an acoustic feel. So,..I played around with it a bit and got something interesting going. I couldnt really make 'em fit to "No Way Out". I could get the first line but after that it didnt really seem to fit. Maybe i was trying to stay to close to what I have now. I'll give it a few more try's and maybe try and do a music re-write. If you have some more ideas for this set of lyrics let me know and Ill post the acoustic idea.
This was the direction I was heading in with "No Way Out"
Forlorn eyes conceal my own
Immortal life
Called at night we saw the same omen
I now share thier plight
This is how,..we live
as we have for so long
and now,..for me
real life's all gone
Now I know why
All this happened to me
and i,..steal lives so go hide
before it happens to you
but i see no way out
For in my soul there's many lives and
two more have died
Howling at night,..I've seen with my own eyes
two more will rise
So long,..it seems
till I go out
Oh how,..I'll feed
and realize somehow
That I know why
All this happened to me
and i see a,..new life
about to happen to you
and i see no way out
And i know why
all this happened to me,..and now
I know i've seen it happen to you
and I,..see no,..way out
Anyway,..i was makin' it into a story about a guy who realizes that he's a vampire. Yeah,..I know,..it's kinda cheesy,..but,...it fits anyway. I'm still playin' with this.
Thanks alot for putting some time in on it. I really like the lyrics you wrote. If I cant get 'em to fit in this tune,..I''l use 'em in another one if thats cool with you.
Take 'er easy,..
Calwood