Get rid of the buzz.(might be where the guitar player stands in the room)..Live D.....The guitar part is actually kinda cool man..and the sound isn't bad either...the muted part sounds cool too..yes the mix is weird but all the elements are there...Vocal is a little hard to take on this cut man.
No One....same buzz man...same problem with the vocal too. This song is boring man....Am-G, Am-Em with a lame melody.....mix is terrible...ya...wtf you doin postin these mixes man...oops...you did say critique the music not the mix..ok...singing man...it's called "pitch". Try it sometime. Lead guitar sucks man...that van halen pull off shit sounded amateurish. You gotta have some knowledge and chops to pull that stuff off. You need to learn about song structure, (AABA), you need to understand the word "hook".You need to know what a "release" is and how to use it......Basically man.... your songwriting skills need to grow up! Be optomistic though man. You can't go anywhere but up from here.
