Review this Song for my friends demo OR ELSE

[Erockrazor]

Making a demo for my friends , just about finished this song. Only a minor part still missing but i want as much help as i can mixing .. i dont wanna let my friends down. I want to get the best product i can for these guys. Please give me your opinion and some tips to maybe improve my mix. thanks

titled - Sayrelin - " drama in the ER "

www.soundclick.com/ericgieg

 

[JazzMang]

OK, I listened.
1 - Don't try to stereo-ize the guitars... it makes it sound cheap and thin. Try to record the part twice and pan them to taste.
2 - There is no low-mid in the song at all.
3 - Vocals are buried... EQ and compress to taste to make them stick out a bit more.
4 - Maybe use some reverb on backing vocals as an idea.
5 - If you got the tracks, pan the overheads.

Those are the biggies for now.

 

[minofifa]

yeah, there seems to be a lack of mids and lows. the guitars sound very thin.

 

[Erockrazor]

Okay i tried taking your suggestions into my next mix of it. Maybe this one sounds a little better. Its not too loud though but please give it a listen.

www.soundclick.com/ericgieg

titled 2nd mix

thanks alot.