Please Critique My Song? -Adolescence

[rilez]

Hey I'm new to this forum and I would love it if you all could tell me the pros and cons of a song off an EP I have been working on for a while now. Anything technical or artisticly viable is super useful!! I am 18 and have been recording music for 2 years now. Im currently a college student and this is what I do with ALL of my free time so give it a listen.

The song is about my generation and the dudes that inhabit it.

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It's definitely the Punkiest song off the EP.

Thanks!

 

[ddrummer8]

Great song man, I enjoyed that.

 

[JG96]

Bring up the snare a lil and bring down the kick. I would also pan the guitars a bit and eq them differently because they blend a lot, unless thats what ur going for.

 

[rilez]

ya the kick is a lttle high, this one i kind of just want a wall of sound for the guitars. thanks a lot guys

 

[Murdersgalore]

The overall mix is kinda weak. When the vocals kick in they are actually thicker than the accompaniment. The bass is there but needs more depth. Not just the bass track, but the whole mix in general.