NOT a Christmas song!!!!

[RAMI]

Hey guys.....I thought this thread died a few weeks ago. I responded to some of you with rep and a comment...but I can't remember who I did that to and who I didn't...So if I left anyone out, I apologize.

I really appreciate all the comments, and most of them were right on, now that I listen again to the tune for the first time on a week. I'll be making adjustments.

Thanx for al the help.

 

[true-eurt]

Hey RAMI....never zip up a good thing...or put it down for that matter.

I think the song could have been just a bit longer.

I like the sound of your voice taken to the edge...even with the hints of it becoming strained in parts..but just not enough to call it strain..just on the edge of it. I wish I could do that...I seem to fall off the edge of strain every time...

I like the drive you got in here...you got that funk in your soul that reflects in your music...and those drums rock!

At first listen, I thought the right panned guit to be too naked sounding in the bounce back and forth with the left panned one starting at :08.....BUT as I listened to the progression of the song, I realized it was a good nakedness...just setting the stage for a bigger show...like a stripper...removing a glove...but instead of taking off "more" things..the song kept adding them with more funk and it was rockin!!

I would have loved a second play off the bass(back and forth) you did at 1:08..and a longer one...cause I love the tone you have on the bass and that would have given the song a longer stretch to play too!!

The words are awesome!!

As usual...a Rockin Song RAMI!!

 

[LeeRosario]

Rami,


I'm wicked late on this, but you almost have this Primus delivery at times that's just great, man. The vocals sound very Janes Addiction at times.

Good stuff.

 

[RAMI]

Hey RAMI....never zip up a good thing...or put it down for that matter.

I think the song could have been just a bit longer.

I like the sound of your voice taken to the edge...even with the hints of it becoming strained in parts..but just not enough to call it strain..just on the edge of it. I wish I could do that...I seem to fall off the edge of strain every time...

I like the drive you got in here...you got that funk in your soul that reflects in your music...and those drums rock!

At first listen, I thought the right panned guit to be too naked sounding in the bounce back and forth with the left panned one starting at :08.....BUT as I listened to the progression of the song, I realized it was a good nakedness...just setting the stage for a bigger show...like a stripper...removing a glove...but instead of taking off "more" things..the song kept adding them with more funk and it was rockin!!

I would have loved a second play off the bass(back and forth) you did at 1:08..and a longer one...cause I love the tone you have on the bass and that would have given the song a longer stretch to play too!!

The words are awesome!!

As usual...a Rockin Song RAMI!!

Hey TRUE, Thanx alot for the comments and suggestions. The song was longer when I first posted it, but it wasn't right. The intro was too long and the parts I took out were just in another space or something....they didn't fit. I always limit my solos, maybe a bit too much, because I only can do so much before I either lose it or just start repeating things. BUt your idea of the trade off with the bass is good. Thanx alot.

Rami,


I'm wicked late on this, but you almost have this Primus delivery at times that's just great, man. The vocals sound very Janes Addiction at times.

Good stuff.

Thanx alot, Lee. I should go listen to those 2 bands. I know the names, but don't think I'm familiar with their music. People are often telling me I sound like bands I've never heard. It's weird. Wait, maybe these guys are ripping ME off!!!

 

[mm2k5]

shouldn't you put it down before you zip it up ...haha...nice tune by the way :-D