Hi Vox,
Just when you thought it had all gone quiet...
Overall I thought this was pretty good. Lots of mix comments so far.
On the song - I thought the vox should come in at about 0:20...
At 1:44, it sounds (musically) like a bridge, or pre-chorus, but a chorus doesn't follow it. In fact if I was brutally honest, I couldn't tell which part WAS the chorus...! Wherever it is, I think it needs lifting somehow to make it more hooky.
I like the chord riff at 2:08 - a little "Who-esque"?
Cheers,
Mscmln.