I like the intro, it's all very clean. You could add a 'Mastering Reverb' to the final file to give it more space. Both guitars could also take on a touch more reverb or delay.
And I like a dry presentation on this board, it really gives us the opportunity to think about where things might go.
I think the guitar stereo left is panned a touch to far.
At 00:11 you 'abandon' stereo right' and this is dangerous. People on the right side of the car, the right side of the room ... you lose them. I suggest cloning the left guitar and presenting it panned hard right, with lots of reverb and delay, at 25% of the volume or so of the original track ... a 'ghost' of that track, just so there is 'something' happening stereo right.
At 00:19, I like what is happening mixwise. You could bring things in a bit closer, to 'hold' the vox a little tighter.
At 00:26, YOU are singing quite well. Don't cheat us of the vocal. It's almost easily understandable with headphones on, but there is a touch to much reverb. The vox is lost on speakers.
Don't step on your lead vocal, or you step on the whole song. You sing well enough, let us hear it. And you should know by now, I lobby for an upfront vocal ... just like the big boys sell.
TripleM is gonna like this one.
Killer drums.
You don't need much more on the vocal, and the guitars can't stand anymore compression. I would reduce the guitar on left a bit during the verse and bring it up on the break.
At 02:11 you abandon stereo right just for a few beats ... that's ok ... I think, it's effective.
Cool sound for your guitar break solo.
If you create more headroom for the lead vocal, you will be able to present the backup-harmony vocal with much more seperation. As is, there is no 'room' for the backup vocal under the lead, so you have to reduce the instruments to create headroom for the leadvox, so the harmony-backs can live under it.
If you are not confident enough of the lead vox, re-sing it a whole bunch of times ... like we ALL DO !
cool song, nice, peppy, poppy ... good feelings !
OMG good feelings !
Thanks for sharing !
Drums sound really good. Bass too. Guitars are cool too. Liked all your sounds. Cool solo sound. As others said tame the right guitar. The vocals sound a little muffled compared to the rest. Is that a dynamic mic? Is there any FX on the vocal that could be causing some mud. Maybe just needs a little more high end. Just seems to lack some clarity compared to the rest.
