New song - review please

[espskully]

http://www.gunnar.ca/bleed.htm

Here's the tune I wrote the music for - these are John Mayers lyrics - he invited people to write the music/melody.

Figured I'd try it out for fun.

Opinions?

Thanks!

 

[the_philth]

Well, since my computer speakers arent the greatest, I'm not hearing much low-end. Otherwise I think it's a great take. Everything seems to be placed well in the mix (other than the bass drum and bass guitar [you know the story!])!

I'm not that experienced in "recording" per se, but I know a decent mix when I hear one, and this is one!

Good job "espskully"

 

[espskully]

Hey thanks for listening and the feedback philth. Great name!

I'll take another listen in the car and see if she needs a bass boost.

Thanks again,

cheerz.

-A

 

[Dogman]

Nice tune. I think the music fits it well. Nice voice also. I can't really fault this in anyway myself. If I heard it on the radio, it would fit in well. Good job.
Ed

 

[espskully]

Thank you dogman. My voice is something I'm still really getting to know. I've been playing guitar for 17 years and singing for about 2. It's hard!

Anyway, thank you for listening and your feedback.

Cheers!

-Aaron

 

[David]

Thank you dogman. My voice is something I'm still really getting to know. I've been playing guitar for 17 years and singing for about 2. It's hard!

Anyway, thank you for listening and your feedback.

Cheers!

-Aaron

Listened to this the other day. I think your vocal's sound really good for just doing it two yrs. Good tune man.

 

[espskully]

Thank you freshears.