well you certainly are quite skilled with the samples. i am not familiar with the original song but i would probably be much less embarrassed if somebody saw me bumping your version than the original. It is possible that you could turn it into a usable track if you made a different version with the vocals toned down. It is uncommon but there are songs that have a continuous background vocal that sound good (outkast and UGK player's anthem comes to mind). it would be a very uplifting/positive type beat, and i know that you are more into gutter type lyrics. That is the type of thing that i do not hear often, but i think sounds good, to have an uplifting beat with more negative lyrics that do not really match your expectations for when you hear the beat. But maybe that's just me.
i don't know if you've already made a thread about it but the one titled 'the climax' is also quite impressive. You certainly do not make throwaway beats. i am basically too embarrassed to put up any of my work knowing the shoes that i would have to fill around here.