Need some feed on this track.

[REEK BROCK]

Made this yesterday but I'm feeling it one minute but not the next.

JOYOUS

 

[Physical Ill]

I'm not really feeling it at all...

 

[REEK BROCK]

Exactly whats wrong? Style , sounds , mixing?

 

[ammarg89]

is that melody not very catchy jus sounds like random notes being thrown togther

 

[gullyjewelz]

i dont think the hi hats are that helpful - the bassline is ok - but the drumz really need more . . . well a different pattern and different "soundign" drumz . . .

 

[REEK BROCK]

Thanks fellas.