my first MP3

[Hi_D_Ho_Man]

Critique this piece for me. Be as brutal as you gotta be (otherwise I won't get any better)

This was done July 4 2001, with a Yamaha psr520 and an MPC

1. excuse the flaws in the mp3 conversion. I used Media Wizard and got tired of tyring to smooth it out.

2. I know there's lack of panning and effects. I did'nt and don't know how to use all that.

3. Why is this digital stuff so hard???

http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/2524/2524314.html

 

[Beathoven]

The beats lack aggressivity (If I can tell it like this)... The kicks & the snares are lacking 'power'... They should be 'hitting harder'...

Aside from that, I like the rapper...

Peace,
Beathoven

 

[Hi_D_Ho_Man]

The beats lack aggressivity (If I can tell it like this)... The kicks & the snares are lacking 'power'... They should be 'hitting harder'...

I see what you mean,all the sounds are from the keyboard, and believe it or not, those are from the best drum kit that my keyboard had to offer.

thanx for the feedback

 

[Beathoven]

Hmmmmm... You should be able to change the volume for each instrument on the mpc (I guess that you record each instrument one at a time). You just have to lift up the volume of the kicks & the snares, boost the highs of the kicks a bit and everything should be alright...

Peace,
Beathoven

 

[Raticus]

Nice song has potential... As Beathoven said the kik and snr are in the background... You need to make them stand out a little more.... MCee's sound pretty good........


Raticus
Chop Shop Productions
http://mp3.com/chopshop