Museman and Axe Collborate

[Axe4Yahweh]

boydrj;


Thanks for the listen and critique.


Buck;

Hey Bro, glad ya dig the tune. We just may get together sometime. Who knows?

kormaniac;

Man, thanks for those encouraging words!

freshears;

Wow Dude, this must be killin ya by now!!! Man, I appreciate all those listens and the comments!!!

CR ><>

 

[flat-9]

Good work guys!

Lyrics are theologically sound with a good message. Vocals could be compressed slightly though.

Why that slapstick on the crash periodically? I'd dump it!

Harmonic formula is very predictable and I'd like a deceptive chord thrown in once in a while but considering the genre, and the syncopated hooks in the rhythm....it works!

Mix still needs some tweaking. Bass is great and full! Guitar solo is quite cool even with a few questionable notes. Nice organ line esp mixed well @ 3:23, octave jump @ 3:42 is fine BUT... The 2 octave jump at the end doesn't work...the patch sounds much too thin and piercing in that high a register!My suggestion would be to use both the lower 2 octaves ( double it for fatness) on the ending, but stay away from that high end with that particular patch!

All in all, very praiseworthy collab CR & Pete!

 

[Axe4Yahweh]

Flat-9;

Good to see ya Bro! Thanks for the listen and suggestions, Man!!!

We are working on it.

CR ><>

 

[Axe4Yahweh]

Waiting on the remix....

CR ><>