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marshall409
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Nice one Adam. It's got good structure, rhyme, and reads pretty smooth. It definitely expresses a hatred, yes it's harsh, of the current music scene. Good to write something that is negative, and critical once in a while to open up people's eyes to truth. You have some good examples to back up your opinions also.
I did feel a bit of confusion when you said turn off your radio. It a conflict to me because, if you turn off the radio you won't hear this important message or, any of the good stuff. Good stuff refers to music you, as a listener, feel does not sell out the business or is important to listen to or just plain "good". I'm not sure how to focus it on the bad stuff though.....And this is just my gut reaction when reading it, it's a cool message and a well written song....
I like your signature quote from Neil too...
I did feel a bit of confusion when you said turn off your radio. It a conflict to me because, if you turn off the radio you won't hear this important message or, any of the good stuff. Good stuff refers to music you, as a listener, feel does not sell out the business or is important to listen to or just plain "good". I'm not sure how to focus it on the bad stuff though.....And this is just my gut reaction when reading it, it's a cool message and a well written song....
I like your signature quote from Neil too...
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marshall409
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thanks alot
thanks for that input. i get what you mean. i will definitely consider it. my songs usually get re written a few times plus i know the chorus is the weak spot right now.
Adam
thanks for that input. i get what you mean. i will definitely consider it. my songs usually get re written a few times plus i know the chorus is the weak spot right now.
Adam