Like This (NEW JOINT For your mixtapes)

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your flow is so not fluent its not funny...

your adlibs are way off, i cant even tell what you sayin sometimes... your lyrics are dope but no one can listen to it cuz the quality is no good as well as flow and delivery.... what your sayin is good but its not flowin and some lines dont even rhyme.. This is so not mixtape worthy... mixtape shit gotta be catchy n hot... ya voice is straight, but again you need to work onya flow alot along with either less adlibs or work on making them land better cuz it just clouds up what your saying... common mistakes... 1
 
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youre entitled to your opinion so i wont shit on it

but i really think you are wrong about the rhyme patterns, i swtich patterns but it is always elaborate, but not necessarrally predictable. My cadence is different, i dont want you to know whats comes next, it with purpose. But honestly, i have never heard that my flow is not fluent. I guarantee your opinion is in the small minority.

I appreciate you listening, and it was obviously not your personal style, but i know that flow and delivery are solid.

Anyone care to offer a second opinion?
 
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