Lemon...I just have to post my thoughts here...
I have been listening to this song pretty much all day today...wanting to get the feel of it. I listened to the original twice and the revised one ....well, I lost count...
You mentioned in your first post, that you had played everything on the revision. You should have done
that on the first one....cept the vocals were pretty good.
The difference in the two recordings amazes me. And not just the recording, but the talent also.
The guitar playing in no way sucks, but is rather excellent.
Your lyrics and song structure is ingenius in my opinion.
The drums are well executed to my ears....if this is your idea of a rough outline....then the finished product will be a gem!!!
I know I don't seem to hear the same thing you guys do on these recordings, so I tend to be less critical. But you also must remember...neither will any of the reg folks, who only want to listen....They won't notice those tiny EQ problems or notice that slight lack of creamy, milky, layered on sound...
They will however notice the talent and heart that went into melding these
awesome kick ass sounds, bringing them togather as a finished work of passion.
Shit...I should be a professional critic...I write awesome reviews!!!
And I have listened to a lot of talent here in the clinic..
r00..you definately kick ass with your combination headcutting, wanking, and wah...
Dog...you truely amaze me as to the sudden surge of guitar prowess you have displayed....you got a headcutting midget in there?
Snake..you are the 80's funk king....
Tim..you truely are the classy romantic gurly magnate!!!...
Rami...and his funky dance sounds that get cha going.....
DavidK ...bringing cultured sounds of Epic proportions...
Incanus and
Supercreep...enchanting us with the sounds from an Era of change....
Space....from out there yonder....
Cellar...the dark siblance lord....
metalhead....the Vincent Price of wanking.....
just to name a few...I could go on and on ...I am hoping we can entice
Wilko in here...his lyrical lilting sounds of fancifulness...and
all you other guys that hang in here.
You each have your own niche' that is full of talent...maybe some needing more polishing than others...but man..it is there!! I fuking love you guys!!!!! I am honored to do anything with you.....do ya all think maybe I have had a weeee bit toooo much red-beer?....if you only knew how many ******* times I had to type and retype this and all these little dots are making me dizzy!!!.....
Barman bring me and the meisters another round!!!!