last night i was pissed..

[fprod south]

That's one set of lungs you got there!!!!
Very enjoyable. Love them vocals.

 

[chrisharris]

Let's recap ... i got better at asking for help!!!..

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA
HAHAHAHAHAHAH
HAHAHAHAHHAAH
HAHAHAHAHAHAH
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I laughed

 

[B.SABBATH]

o.k.

the recording sucks and there are mistakes all over this thing BUT

I think the melody and idea are great, and the vocals have the potential to be great.. I *really like* the guitar riff 'idea' and the vocal melody..

maybe you should get chris or whoever to help with this..

actually, it would probably be better if you learned how to do it yourself so your original ideas don't get *translated*, and they can stay true.. some people probably can't grasp the heavyness that would be necessary here, but you can start by fixing the obvious performance mistakes, and badly recorded tracks, but you have to be able to hear them first..This could be a really great tune..

 

[chrisharris]

actually, it would probably be better if you learned how to do it yourself so your original ideas don't get translated

47 Votes for agreeing with that statement.

 

[SLuiCe]

I agree with everything Sam said.

The song seriously rules.







Rules, I said.

 

[TripleM]

Can't add much to what's been said. Some off-keyness on some vocals. Guitar might be just a bit harsh. The musical break right before the fadeout might have gone on a little too long.

The music is nicely written. Lines like "the pills have all stopped working" are real good. Some double tracked vocals!! Yipee. Come over to the dark side with me, my friend.

I'd probably chuck everything except the song itself. But I would definitely get this one done correctly.

Trip.

 

[scottboyher]

Vedry, Vedry interesting...

 

[fenderlikingood]

o.k.

the recording sucks and there are mistakes all over this thing BUT

I think the melody and idea are great, and the vocals have the potential to be great.. I *really like* the guitar riff 'idea' and the vocal melody..

maybe you should get chris or whoever to help with this..

actually, it would probably be better if you learned how to do it yourself so your original ideas don't get *translated*, and they can stay true.. some people probably can't grasp the heavyness that would be necessary here, but you can start by fixing the obvious performance mistakes, and badly recorded tracks, but you have to be able to hear them first..This could be a really great tune..

Ditto (just beacuse) You know, this sound's like me on a good day!!! But i can't write a song AS good AS this!!!!!! DAMNIT!
This has serious JAM(al) potential! like a level 10 on the"rock my ass" meter! i hope you decide to polish this puppy! (but i wont beg)please??

Thank's JAMal!!!!

peace

Rick

 

[Guernica]

Hey Jamal,
......Hearing some Janes Addiction in this one. Goddamn thats a high note...... makes the ole scrote shrink up like a prune I would tear it apart and re-record it bro..... could be very nice. ......I know you aint a recording enthusiast for recording's sake. ......but better penmanship makes a persons great books easier to read. knowwhatimean vern?

another tune w/ great potential.
g

 

[powderfinger]

this song's got great attitude........very well done.......

also...you sing it like you mean it......great vocals

 

[Jamal Bucket]

ok ok lets just watch this big steamy coil of shit sink on outta here shall we....

myx:...hahahah well nothing that bad i guess just a bad evening where the "real" song you have been screwing with just fucking lays there mocking you .....

fprod:..see now thats the only thing even remotely musical about this..thanks

b-sabbath:..yeah you know you are right about "doing it myself" and i really should do just that ...im JUST SO FUCKING LAZY...the guitar chords were purposely supposed to sound "off"...sorta in the sabbath vein actually.....see i came up with these chords then i spent about 20minutes trying to write something over it....after i got pissed cause no "magic" happened ..i just sang what you heard over the top...lol...

sluice:..you were SOOOOOOO DRUNK when you wrote that......lmao

scottboyer:...aahhhh..a whiff of truth.....heheheh

rick:..see the thing is im not really a "ROCK YOUR ASS OFF " guy...damn i wish i was but im more of a "POP YOUR ASS OFF" ..guy ...man that sounded funny

guernica:...lol...ya..i hear you...i just wish i had LESS potential and more FINISHED PRODUCT!...janes addiction! very cool....very much "you trying to come up with something constructive to say" but still...i loved that band!!!....thanks

powderfinger:..oh hell yes at the time I SOOOOO MEANT EVRY FUCKING WORD OF IT!!...the chorus:..."given time il amount to nothing"...lol.....but thanks again..


ok ok ...drop it ..it stinks ...................please....

jamal