Laidback oldie that needs to be redone. "shadows"

  • Thread starter Thread starter emser
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It may just be my stupid computer, but I cant play the songs. Media player keeps encountering an unknown error
 
I'm liking the vocals. The lyrics sound great so far. The music is nice too, the only down point is I could imagine Robbie Williams singing it.

Bass has kicked in. Nice.

You really could do with a nicer crash sample. Something with more decay. My advice is to go on cymbal selling websites and record their samples ;)

Man, that crash noise is harsh.

I like the slightly dischordant strings in the little break down.
I dislike the solo, although the scratching noise was nice and not too "in your face".

I'd try recording the solo on a real guitar, and change it a little.

Hope that helps.
 
First thing right off the cuff, this sounds really good. The vox have a ton of space. The synth lead around 3 mins is a bit weak. And I can see the harshness in the cymbals, I'd work on new samples. But I really have nothing else to say. Nice work! I bet it will sound great if you get it mastered.
 
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