I'm liking the vocals. The lyrics sound great so far. The music is nice too, the only down point is I could imagine Robbie Williams singing it.
Bass has kicked in. Nice.
You really could do with a nicer crash sample. Something with more decay. My advice is to go on cymbal selling websites and record their samples
Man, that crash noise is harsh.
I like the slightly dischordant strings in the little break down.
I dislike the solo, although the scratching noise was nice and not too "in your face".
I'd try recording the solo on a real guitar, and change it a little.
First thing right off the cuff, this sounds really good. The vox have a ton of space. The synth lead around 3 mins is a bit weak. And I can see the harshness in the cymbals, I'd work on new samples. But I really have nothing else to say. Nice work! I bet it will sound great if you get it mastered.