Laidback oldie that needs to be redone. "shadows"

[emser]

I like this tune but it`s old and i need to update it.
Any suggestions?

"shadows" @ http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/?aid=4384/singles

/emser

 

[tvolkmann80]

It may just be my stupid computer, but I cant play the songs. Media player keeps encountering an unknown error

 

[emser]

Can you dl it?

 

[bazzlad]

I'm liking the vocals. The lyrics sound great so far. The music is nice too, the only down point is I could imagine Robbie Williams singing it.

Bass has kicked in. Nice.

You really could do with a nicer crash sample. Something with more decay. My advice is to go on cymbal selling websites and record their samples

Man, that crash noise is harsh.

I like the slightly dischordant strings in the little break down.
I dislike the solo, although the scratching noise was nice and not too "in your face".

I'd try recording the solo on a real guitar, and change it a little.

Hope that helps.

 

[PDXROX]

First thing right off the cuff, this sounds really good. The vox have a ton of space. The synth lead around 3 mins is a bit weak. And I can see the harshness in the cymbals, I'd work on new samples. But I really have nothing else to say. Nice work! I bet it will sound great if you get it mastered.