Just finish mixing 2 more tracks. Check em out

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I'm about 7 songs into my LP. Been working on these for months now. The first track I did about 6 months ago and just got around to mixing it for the 10th time. I think this may be the final mix. The second I did about a month ago. It's the intro to the LP. Feed back please. I took all your critigues to heart and remixed the others so thanks for your time. I may put yall in the credits for the help. Well hear are the tracks.

Ya though I couldn't murda da track (explicit lyrics)

hifi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/52427

lofi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/52427


Intro

hifi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/hifi/52558

lofi

http://hotsounds.dmusic.com/music/stream/lofi/52558


Again thanks for you time.
 
These are not official releases so feed back would help me get these finalized and ready for official release. Thanks
 
i like this

your shyyt is dope playboy, i'm feeling that second one the most. i'm bobbing to the second song right now. the 1st one can do with out the multiple delay emphasized on the last word of the 3rd verse. as an effect, a little scratching in the chorus would sound tight. you have a mobb deep mixed with a canibus style to me and your'e sic with it.
you've been given four mics.
:cool: :cool: :cool: :cool:
 
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b-face

i know you are hating life at ft. polk couzin.
 
represent the good PGC joe.

you got something nice cooking.

are you doing any gigs or open mic nights? i'll come support.

now on to the critique:

murda the track:
1) i think the strings are too high in the mix. they are competing with the lead vocal slightly, but they are not overpowering it. drop them back a little.

2) there is a noticeable gap or glitch between the verses and the chorus

3) there is nothing musically to distinguish between the verses and the chorus. if you played a sustained string sound on the chorus between the staccato bass string and the string melody it would distinguish between the verses and chorus. OR... put a sustained, reverbed string pad low in the mix on the chorus.
 
dope

the 1st one was tight the second one i wasent feeling you flow it wasent consitant with the beat
 
crosstudio said:
represent the good PGC joe.

you got something nice cooking.

are you doing any gigs or open mic nights? i'll come support.

now on to the critique:

murda the track:
1) i think the strings are too high in the mix. they are competing with the lead vocal slightly, but they are not overpowering it. drop them back a little.

2) there is a noticeable gap or glitch between the verses and the chorus

3) there is nothing musically to distinguish between the verses and the chorus. if you played a sustained string sound on the chorus between the staccato bass string and the string melody it would distinguish between the verses and chorus. OR... put a sustained, reverbed string pad low in the mix on the chorus.
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Thanks for the input. I never thought about adding something to the chorus. I will probably give that a try. I'm probably going to remix this again tonight. The problem with the stings is fixable because I think I was mixing it with my CD recorder and Mixer playing the track at the same time. I had two buttons press for listening on my mixer one was for the ouput of the mixer and the input of the CD recorder.:o I was wondering if anyone would notice that and you did.

I know your a busy guy but could you elaborate some more on the glitch. 4 engineering ears are better than 2. Especially fresh ears because I know I've mix this track over a dozen times. So I'm probably deaf to it the glitch.

Thanks for your help dawg.
 
the switch from verse 1 to chorus at 0:59 is fine, but the switch after the 2nd verse at 1:57 doesn't quite feel right. it feels like you pasted it in so your vocal timing between the verse and chorus don't quite feel right. the switch at 2:57 between verse 3 and chorus is perfect like verse 1. it's just the one at 1:57 that doesn't quite drop right.

i know what it is:

in verse 1, you lead into the chorus with

IF you thought ...

the leading IF sets me up to hear the hook.

in verse 3, you lead into the chorus with

THOUGH you thought...

but in verse 2 there's no leading word so it doesn't flow in as nice as the other two verses.
 
chalin27 said:
Thanks for the input. I never thought about adding something to the chorus. I will probably give that a try. I'm probably going to remix this again tonight. The problem with the stings is fixable because I think I was mixing it with my CD recorder and Mixer playing the track at the same time. I had two buttons press for listening on my mixer one was for the ouput of the mixer and the input of the CD recorder.:o I was wondering if anyone would notice that and you did.

I know your a busy guy but could you elaborate some more on the glitch. 4 engineering ears are better than 2. Especially fresh ears because I know I've mix this track over a dozen times. So I'm probably deaf to it the glitch.

Thanks for your help dawg.
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Thanks man your a life saver. Yeah I missed that totally. Got to fix that. Yeah I didn't paste it maybe I should have. Thanks man
 
i'm at work, for some reason the tracks won't play??? i don't know what's up.....may have to do with the firewall, but other peoples tracks play.

you in PG County huh?

hit me up on AOL or AIM
sugaty

i'm still waiting on my partna in St. Louis to mix down the songs that are going to go on the 2000 cd's we got sittin' in the studio. So we been doing some freestyles that we wanna put on it. I'd like to get out to ya area, we also planning a show around April 18th/19th, so you could swang to frederick and put it down the best way u know how...feel me

aight mayne holla at cha
That Texas Fella
sugaty@aol.com
 
originally posted by flossy boy

we also planning a show around April 18th/19th, so you could swang to frederick and put it down the best way u know how...feel me
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that's what i'm talking about, i wish i was closer to your way.
 
Yeah I'll get at ya most def. If you want to saturate my area with your stuff I have no problem helping ya'll out wit dat. Ill definitely hit you up on AIM. I got 500 CD's of a compilation I need to put out so we can work something out my man.
 
i been tryin to check it but my wife wont shut the hell up...ok here we go now for the 10th time



yeah them strings up to high i dont like that snare sound but that could be my personal preference. 2nd verse dont have the same energy as the first and 3rd. those strings get a little annoying if you could breakem down or switch em up that would give ya ear a break and you a chance to re introduce them in a unique way. that reverb on how bout that sounds a little cheesy

Second song
this intro needs a fading tail where the strings cut out. it leaves too much space in the song. you may have cut them to soon. i could picture some ad lib on this at the begining but again that could just be me. that reverb on the kids voice needs to be reduced.

Thes are some good ass tracks tho
 
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