Yep - lofi is not for everyone in this digital age of crystal clarity. Don't let it bother you. This sound authentic to me. Mix wise, there is a bit of harsh highs towards the end that you could look at - not sure of it's a guitar or synth but I'd play around and eq that down a bit. Am I losing hearing in my left ear or is everything leaning center/right? I sure hope it's the latter lol