I'm sick of it. I'm done. It's me.

[Lantern111]

Let me know. I guess.

 

[Track Rat]

Please don't cross post. You have it up in the MP3 clinic, that's the only place it should be.

 

[RockinRobby]

Well, singing and mixing are two different things? It is possible to solicit comments on the mix, and on the vocals separately? But the OP here doesn't seem to address/solicit any issues specific to singing/vocals.

 

[Lantern111]

My name is Joshua. Hi Robby. Good point. Who cares where I post. Apparently "someone does". Have I tampered with your browsing experience, Rat? I did this song in an improv. state of being, so I shared it with the intentions of sharing. That is all. I am not looking for your approval, Rat. Relax my man.

 

[Track Rat]

Don't be a dick junior. Try to get along.

 

[Lantern111]

I am over it.

 

[RockinRobby]

Well, it's fun to be a dick sometimes, and I've been guilty on more than one occassion. So your song? The delay doesn't work with just a guitar and the vox on this style. And I just posted about emotion/feeling over hitting the notes? But it can be carried too far? ;-) My advice would be;

1. Reduce the delay by 1/2

2. Spread the guitar, and add a touch of verb.

3. Use a noise gate on the mics.

4. Tune the guitar down a whole step, or play it in another key.

5. Sing it with emotion, but maybe a weence less.

 

[Lantern111]

Well, it's fun to be a dick sometimes, and I've been guilty on more than one occassion. So your song? The delay doesn't work with just a guitar and the vox on this style. And I just posted about emotion/feeling over hitting the notes? But it can be carried too far? ;-) My advice would be;

1. Reduce the delay by 1/2

2. Spread the guitar, and add a touch of verb.

3. Use a noise gate on the mics.

4. Tune the guitar down a whole step, or play it in another key.

5. Sing it with emotion, but maybe a weence less.

I was actually extremely integrated with herbal supplements at the time. I may actually turn this into a real composition at one point. Who knows. I just improved the whole thing in one take. Just some free form movement and such. I love getting into my subconscious center, it is something special for me. A breath of reality. Pure reflection. Thanks for the input, I will keep all of the above in mind. You are a smart human. Truly.

 

[Julnori]

Hahahha, you are so funny

 

[Imalazypup]

Not that I know much, but I would back off the reverb just a bit on both the guitar and vocals.

 

[Guitargodgt]

My reaction to your voice is I hate it. It doesn't sound genuine to me.

 

[Lantern111]

My reaction to your voice is I hate it. It doesn't sound genuine to me.

That's because it wasn't. I love you too.

 

[grimtraveller]

I like the guitar playing more than I like the singing but after a few listens, the vocal isn't bad. It's not as harsh as it initially sounds. The delay is a bit irritating but that's more down to the execution than the actual idea. I figure if you were mixing it for keeps you'd work on it.
I thought it sounded genuine enough, in a wheezy psychotic anguished kind of way. It would fit in the final scene of a Kurt Cobain biopic quite snugly.

 

[Lt. Bob]

My name is Joshua. Hi Robby. Good point. Who cares where I post. .

actually lots of people do and it will absolutely cut down on the number of responses you get.

 

[Lt. Bob]

guitar sounds pretty good ..... vox is horrible.

 

[Lantern111]

guitar sounds pretty good ..... vox is horrible.

That's somewhat of the idea. Too be so "horrible" is fun when you don't give a shit. i appreciate the kind words though.