I'm Done

[jpw23]

Your voice is very good. The vocals are definately awesome. I like the lead tone, just not the rythym tone at the end. The distortion is too gainy. Drums are kinda loud and boxy sounding. Fix those things and your golden.

Thanks for the listen man!!! Drums are something I'll have to learn to live with.

 

[ido1957]

Drums sound fine. I'd like something in addition to the rhythm during the pre-solo section. Maybe some of your fab keys... As it sits it is playable live though which is a BIG consideration.

I hope I'm not out of line but I have to say that you could use a better band name. My vote is for "The Jay Williams Band" The word "fabulous" is also well suited for the name....

 

[JonPaulP]

Nice song, your voice suits the genre very well.

 

[jpw23]

Drums sound fine. I'd like something in addition to the rhythm during the pre-solo section. Maybe some of your fab keys... As it sits it is playable live though which is a BIG consideration.

I hope I'm not out of line but I have to say that you could use a better band name. My vote is for "The Jay Williams Band" The word "fabulous" is also well suited for the name....

Thanks Ido..........I do like the word Fabulous!!!!