I threw this together with a friend

  • Thread starter Thread starter Angermeyer
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It's an interesting little jam.

First, I think the overall volume level should be brought up, 'cause the entire song never registered over '3' on a volume scale of '10', and sometimes much less. Average loudness is way too low.

Second, I think it should be tightened up a bit, musically, performance-wise.

Third, I think there should be a break, a bridge, or a middle eight thrown in there, to break up the basic one-line of the song.

Still, it's and interesting little musical interlude, just the way it is.

;)
 
Thanks for the listen, I'll be putting a lot more effort into t before i say done.
 
I pretty much agree with everything A Reel Person said and I think the kick drum has a little too much a of a midrange thud to it.

It sounds like you just need to keep playing around and rehearsing this tune and see where it goes.Like A Reel Person mentioned,a bridge of some sort would be nice to break up the monotony.

What are you recording this with?You seem to have things spread ok in the mix.Just keep at it until you get it!;)
 
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