I am That Man

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Chris,

Thanks very much. I appreciate the time and response.

Fangar
 
Cool spa!
Stick with you and your wife dude,it's much safer!:D

Really great lyrics,reminds me of how Ian Anderson used to write them.
Thanks for posting them.

I'm going to try that 100'th second slip on the stereo guitars,thanks for the tip!

Pete
 
Fangar said:


About the kick. Do you mean that it has to much range? I sure notice that it changes drastically from system to system. For example, when I play the song through my car stereo and home stereo the kick takes quite a different shape. Still working on the right mix. Thanks.

Fangar
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...yeah, sort of...I reckon it could be a bit tighter, eventhough that is not a bad kick sound at all that you've got, but maybe for this particular tune it could be a bit "tighter"...

thanks..
cheers
 
Overall a very cool song...I agree with Cyanjaguar abut the hook of the song....there never really is a pay off where the song culminates into a hook.Vocals are excellent......the clean guitars are a little too big and jangly....almost to the point of being harsh....they could probably be turned down a little bit and compressed a little to control them.

I really like your vocals(nice doubles and harmonies) and the melody was good throughout but there never was a pay off in the chorus to take make it peak.....it's like it gets hung on the prechorus without a major payoff.....with verses that strong you need a climax.

Ok,Im done rambling.Enjoyed it.
 
Roker1 said:
...yeah, sort of...I reckon it could be a bit tighter, eventhough that is not a bad kick sound at all that you've got, but maybe for this particular tune it could be a bit "tighter"...

thanks..
cheers
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I got ya now. Thanks for the clarification on that.

Fangar
 
Kramer said:
Overall a very cool song...I agree with Cyanjaguar abut the hook of the song....there never really is a pay off where the song culminates into a hook.Vocals are excellent......the clean guitars are a little too big and jangly....almost to the point of being harsh....they could probably be turned down a little bit and compressed a little to control them.

I really like your vocals(nice doubles and harmonies) and the melody was good throughout but there never was a pay off in the chorus to take make it peak.....it's like it gets hung on the prechorus without a major payoff.....with verses that strong you need a climax.

Ok,Im done rambling.Enjoyed it.
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Not rambling, just posting your thoughts. Thanks for that. If only I had some more time.

...Just found out tonight that I am back on 12 hour shifts until the impending "war" is over. Oh man... that's gonna be a lot of new toys when the overtime rolls in....

Fangar
 
I like your voice!

I've got nothing to add (that hasn't been said already). :)

I'm sorry. Not much of a help here...
 
Pedullist said:
I like your voice!

I've got nothing to add (that hasn't been said already). :)

I'm sorry. Not much of a help here...
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Glad you liked it.

Fangar
 
Snare sounds pretty good kick drum needs more punch.I like to feel it.Vox a touch heavy in the mix.Nice harmonies.Great melody.More punch in them heavy guitars too.Bring em up in the mix,it's cool if the song gets a little louder cuz of them IMO.
 
great song man, just wished to hear the vocal brighter, like doubling them and bit o reverb

great work man!!
 
W.I.S.C. said:
Snare sounds pretty good kick drum needs more punch.I like to feel it.Vox a touch heavy in the mix.Nice harmonies.Great melody.More punch in them heavy guitars too.Bring em up in the mix,it's cool if the song gets a little louder cuz of them IMO.
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Thanks for the tips and your time.

Fangar
 
groovejunkie said:
great song man, just wished to hear the vocal brighter, like doubling them and bit o reverb

great work man!!
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I tried to keep the vocals as dry as possible. They have a bit of room verb on them, but I always have a problem of making the vocals too wet any other way. There are quite a few harmonies and a few doubles. I didn't want to overdue them. Anyway thanks a bunch for you listen and time.

Cheers,

P.S. Now may Days off from work have been cancelled too so, I won't have any time for a while. Oh but the monies will dry my tears. :p

Fangar
 
Hey Fangar,
...this is the first of yours Ive listened to.... ...looks like ive missed out. Very nice man. Great Vocs! And a very nice tune in its simplicity.... ...thats a good thing. I really like the plunky guitar tone too btw. Stylewise this gives me kind of a bad company vibe. ....that too is a good thing. g
 
Really great tune! Love the lead vox and harmonies...excellent! Took me back to the 70's, but also sounds current..if that makes any sense lol. Loved it, and the mix sounds pretty damn good too.
 
Guernica said:
Hey Fangar,
...this is the first of yours Ive listened to.... ...looks like ive missed out. Very nice man. Great Vocs! And a very nice tune in its simplicity.... ...thats a good thing. I really like the plunky guitar tone too btw. Stylewise this gives me kind of a bad company vibe. ....that too is a good thing. g
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Thanks very much!
 
David said:
Really great tune! Love the lead vox and harmonies...excellent! Took me back to the 70's, but also sounds current..if that makes any sense lol. Loved it, and the mix sounds pretty damn good too.
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Thanks David. Glad you liked it.

Fangar
 
Nice stuff!! You have a good voice and it sounds good on this. I like the song too from a first listen perspective. It sounds like you have a good one in the making here.

Nice work.
 
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