Kramer
Well-known member
Emeric said:
I'll keep doing it, but I need to buckle down and get a little more disciplined at it now that you spotted some fluctuations.
I'll keep doing it, but I need to buckle down and get a little more disciplined at it now that you spotted some fluctuations.
J
JuSumPilgrim
New member
Thoughts on hypnotized:
Nice balance. Each part is heard clearly and has its own space. Very good EQ. Whatre you monitoring with?
What I would change:
The guitar tone in the beginning. Sounds outdated and cliche as does the intro rif.
The vocal doubling is too obvious. I would pan and lower the second vocal more. The vocals are good and up front but too dry. I can hear you put reverb on the harmonies, just enough so that theres space but the main vocal is too dry. Theres also some kind of chorus effect on them that kind of makes it wet and dull at the same time but doesnt work. It kills the presence. I would pull out the vocals at 2.9k and 9k-12k. Good confident singing.
Didnt care much for the song or style overall but there are some nice shifts, nice vocal phrasing and good melodic variations on the chorus.
Nice balance. Each part is heard clearly and has its own space. Very good EQ. Whatre you monitoring with?
What I would change:
The guitar tone in the beginning. Sounds outdated and cliche as does the intro rif.
The vocal doubling is too obvious. I would pan and lower the second vocal more. The vocals are good and up front but too dry. I can hear you put reverb on the harmonies, just enough so that theres space but the main vocal is too dry. Theres also some kind of chorus effect on them that kind of makes it wet and dull at the same time but doesnt work. It kills the presence. I would pull out the vocals at 2.9k and 9k-12k. Good confident singing.
Didnt care much for the song or style overall but there are some nice shifts, nice vocal phrasing and good melodic variations on the chorus.
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Kramer
Well-known member
JuSumPilgrim,
Thanks for your comments!They are much appreciated!
There isnt any chorus on the vocals.It's probably the obvious doubling that you mentioned!
Im gonna re-record the whole thing and post the results when it's done.This is just a scetch of the tune that allowed me to get some much needed feedback and ideas.
Thanks again for taking the time to listen.
Thanks for your comments!They are much appreciated!
There isnt any chorus on the vocals.It's probably the obvious doubling that you mentioned!
Im gonna re-record the whole thing and post the results when it's done.This is just a scetch of the tune that allowed me to get some much needed feedback and ideas.
Thanks again for taking the time to listen.
P
pootpie
New member
ITS SCARY. YOUR RIGHT FIRST YOU HAVE TO HAVE A
MUSICAL IDEAL
POOTPIE
MUSICAL IDEAL
POOTPIE
mixmkr
we don't need rest!!
haha pootie...I get the link...
in your case, you might consider being able to play an instrument equally as important too.
looking for 'verbal sparring' with some of the talant around here, you'd be better off staying under your rock.
in your case, you might consider being able to play an instrument equally as important too.
looking for 'verbal sparring' with some of the talant around here, you'd be better off staying under your rock.
Kramer
Well-known member
mixmkr said:haha pootie...I get the link...
in your case, you might consider being able to play an instrument equally as important too.
looking for 'verbal sparring' with some of the talant around here, you'd be better off staying under your rock.
MIXMKR,
Are you familiar with this troll ?Im not gonna waste the time on this brainless dickhead.
P
pootpie
New member
mixmkr said:haha pootie...I get the link...
in your case, you might consider being able to play an instrument equally as important too.
looking for 'verbal sparring' with some of the talant around here, you'd be better off staying under your rock.
NOW i can't let ya by with that dude, that rock im under is ya ma
and she don't walk the streets anymore because it was her
rock i was under now shes a lady not a dike.
Pootpie
mixmkr
we don't need rest!!
Kramer said:
no...and good choice on a constructive use of time
participant
New member
There's a hot lead!
Love that guitar tone, dude. Yup. That's an SR-16 Excellent levels. Despite that being the SR16, that kick definitely "thumps ya in the chest" like Blue Bear (Bruce) says. The lows in the vocals are just a tad, tad murky heavy (and that's being really picky). Another guitar god to bow to; first VOXVENDOR, now you A guitar god that can mix? You're dangerous! 
Nice song!!
Chad
Love that guitar tone, dude. Yup. That's an SR-16
Excellent levels. Despite that being the SR16, that kick definitely "thumps ya in the chest" like Blue Bear (Bruce) says. The lows in the vocals are just a tad, tad murky heavy (and that's being really picky). Another guitar god to bow to; first VOXVENDOR, now you A guitar god that can mix? You're dangerous! Nice song!!
Chad
Kramer
Well-known member
Re: There's a hot lead!
Chad,
Thanks for the reply!Im no guitar god by any means.LOL.There are too many people here that can take me to school on the guitar.
Im mostly just a songwriter who would like to be able to make top notch recordings some day.Hopefully with the help of the folks here like yourself I'll get to the place I wanna be!Thanks again for listening.
participant said:Love that guitar tone, dude. Yup. That's an SR-16
Nice song!!
Chad
Chad,
Thanks for the reply!
Im no guitar god by any means.LOL.There are too many people here that can take me to school on the guitar.Im mostly just a songwriter who would like to be able to make top notch recordings some day.Hopefully with the help of the folks here like yourself I'll get to the place I wanna be!Thanks again for listening.
smellyfuzz
New member
KRAMER,
As we have crossed paths and reading some of your obnoxious posts, I have come to the conclusion that you are a typically frustrated, self loathing, condescending, mean Musician.
BUT MY GOD IS THIS FUCKING SONG GREAT.
FLAWLESS GUITAR PLAYING !!!
GREAT SINGING !!!!!!
GREAT HARMONIES !!!!!
FABULOUS RECORDING QUALITY THAT I HOPE TO ONE DAY ACHIEVE !!!!!
I still think your a dick, but boy do you do music right.
Sean
As we have crossed paths and reading some of your obnoxious posts, I have come to the conclusion that you are a typically frustrated, self loathing, condescending, mean Musician.
BUT MY GOD IS THIS FUCKING SONG GREAT.
FLAWLESS GUITAR PLAYING !!!
GREAT SINGING !!!!!!
GREAT HARMONIES !!!!!
FABULOUS RECORDING QUALITY THAT I HOPE TO ONE DAY ACHIEVE !!!!!
I still think your a dick, but boy do you do music right.
Sean
Kramer
Well-known member
HevyD47Ca
New member
Whoa
K.......
a musician after my own heart.
I thought the bass fit well.
I started thinking about Elvin Bishop with Duck on Bass
"Raisin Hell" I think the album was called.
Had the R&B with a touch of funk from the bass.
I'm honored you replied to my post.
K.......
a musician after my own heart.
I thought the bass fit well.
I started thinking about Elvin Bishop with Duck on Bass
"Raisin Hell" I think the album was called.
Had the R&B with a touch of funk from the bass.
I'm honored you replied to my post.
Kramer
Well-known member
Re: Whoa
Thanks for checking out this year old post HevyD47Ca!
Man stop it with all that "honored" I replied to your post stuff.LOL.
Im just a hack from way back.. Im honored that YOU checked out my tune!It's Much appreciated.I look forward to bumping into you on the many forums here at hr.com!
HevyD47Ca said:
Thanks for checking out this year old post HevyD47Ca!
Man stop it with all that "honored" I replied to your post stuff.LOL.
Im just a hack from way back.. Im honored that YOU checked out my tune!It's Much appreciated.I look forward to bumping into you on the many forums here at hr.com!
Toki987
Rock Steady
I`ll check this out tommorow, looks like its gonna be a really good listen. 
Kelly5150
New member
I know that "I cant complain" thread is around here somewhere.... hehe
Toki987
Rock Steady
Toki987 said:I`ll check this out tommorow, looks like its gonna be a really good listen.
Ok Home Recording AnchorMan , where is it ??? 'you cleaning house or something?
smellyfuzz
New member
Kramer,
Would you be so kind to tell us about your equipment, experience and recording techniques ?
Don't be a fuck and say no !
You over talented bastard !
You don't deserve such talent !
Share with us lesser musicians !
Bastard.
Sean
Would you be so kind to tell us about your equipment, experience and recording techniques ?
Don't be a fuck and say no !
You over talented bastard !
You don't deserve such talent !
Share with us lesser musicians !
Bastard.
Sean
Pedullist
Stop it, I can't breathe
Link goes to Singles, which is an empty page....
Khompewtur
*Retired*
Yah man, what happened? Did you take down the song?
I couldn't find it on nowhere. PUT it BaCK!
I couldn't find it on nowhere. PUT it BaCK!