How to improve this ditty

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Hmmmmmm, interesting beginning.

Sounds a little soft, the whole thing. Nice synth sounds, nice panning.

Its definitely different. I suppose one would have to hear it in the context of an album, it doesnt really work on its own. It sounds like an introduction to something.
 
Thanks. Yeah, I guess this is the closest thing to "filler" we've got. We were trying to decide whether or not to put it on the demo.
 
Very interresting. I like it.
it seams to be unfinished. I am thinking about story not mix.
The mix itself could be improved by tweaking some sliders but i wouldn't go far from this version.
Well done.
 
Thank you.
Would a demo (composed mainly of the other songs on our soundclick) be better served with or without this one?
 
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