Honest thought on this songs vocals...

[TWProductions]

There are no dubs its a single track so its very raw and I want some honest feedback on the vocals from all your singers out there....

http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks

The song "Enlightened"

 

[emederos]

I dig it, I was honestly expecting less, but I was pleasantly surprised.

Cool vibe you got going on there.

 

[TWProductions]

Man, I wish there was more people who cared to give feedback.

 

[R&B-N-JAZZ_LADY]

I like it too! It's very different and that's what makes it special. Also, you have a nice voice and the beat was cool... :-D Great job!

 

[jsaue055]

want to hear it but the link is not working

 

[TWProductions]

Sorry I deleted the song you can hear it http://soundcloud.com/you/tracks under the song enlightened

 

[emederos]

password required...

 

[TWProductions]

Sorry this will work....Enlightened by TW Productions on SoundCloud - Create, record and share your sounds for free

 

[ido1957]

Three links to get to the song - annoying - go fix all your posts....

The singing is great - good take.

 

[DogmaticVox]

The voice sometimes reminds me of Damon Albarn. The only thing that bugs me is when too many of the lines end in a descending note. Hold the note! It's no biggie, but when done over and over it starts to sound like the singer just gives up on singing the note. haha

 

[wtfuhz]

He has a nice style. Like DogmaticVox said, try to hold the note a little more. Other than that, well done.

 

[Jim Lad]

Very nice.
If you narrow the stereo width and increase the reverb as you fade out you could probably create the illusion of distance/motion.
Maybe you already did that, I'm just listening on the family PC.

 

[JimmyS1969]

"cant make things right" @ 1:15 makes my ocd freak out. Just a bit late. Move that and I got thumbs up. Like Dogs suggestion too.

 

[liquadia]

Youtube is exactly the same! I get zero comments and a fair number of views

youtube.com/liquadia1

 

[dis1here]

nice work keep it up

 

[LisaBennett]

I like it very much
Very chill