Guitar Driven Simple Tune.....

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Here's a tune Snake and I have been working on for a while. I am tired of mixing it, and he seems pretty happy with it.
The Black Demo
It's about 5 chords, and just dirty as ever. Kind of Biker rock stuff. The solo is at the end, so you have to listen to the whole thing..... :p
 
Its good. :cool: THe main thing I would change is the drum pattern, it is monotonous to the point of distraction. The solo is very good, and there is no law that you cant put it at the end. :)

I will give this an 8. I would give a nine if the drum pattern changed. ;) You get the point across with the music. Nice job. :)
 
DavidK said:
Its good. :cool: THe main thing I would change is the drum pattern, it is monotonous to the point of distraction. The solo is very good, and there is no law that you cant put it at the end. :)

I will give this an 8. I would give a nine if the drum pattern changed. ;) You get the point across with the music. Nice job. :)
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Thanks, David. Much appreciated. This is one of the first real stabs at DFHS, for me. I am not a drummer, and figuring out what a drummer might play, is actually pretty baffling. I tried to mix it up some, but still don't have a grasp on things. Snake and his solo's are always wild. Makes up for my lacking at times.
Thanks for the listen man. Much appreciated.
Ed
 
Rawk on Dog!! I love that crazy solo on the guitar!! And the ending!

Kudos to DOG and Snake!!!
 
I am not a drummer, and figuring out what a drummer might play, is actually pretty baffling. I tried to mix it up some, but still don't have a grasp on things.
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Join the club :rolleyes: I havent the slightest idea what to do. I just got an old SR16 drum machine ( to use mainly for metronome for advanced classical stuff). Yours, specifically, is the double snare in a row. The drum SOUND is actually pretty decent. They need to invent a better way of getting drum patterns for the drum-impaired like me, maybe they have em already.
 
Biker Rockin',
If the drums were double tempo it'd do Motorhead proud. Real Lemmy vocals. He's the only rocker known to have been prescribed speed FOR his heart's sake - seems it'll stop without the goey.
The tag on the solo is great. I reckon you should slot in a bar of it in a couple of other places as well..da da da deda ...to create some foreshadowing - oops literary reference sorry!
I quite like the drums - being a "haven't a clue" type of drum programmer (Roland 505).
Born to be wild gentlemen, born to be.
Cheers
rayC
 
rayc said:
Biker Rockin',
If the drums were double tempo it'd do Motorhead proud. Real Lemmy vocals. He's the only rocker known to have been prescribed speed FOR his heart's sake - seems it'll stop without the goey.
The tag on the solo is great. I reckon you should slot in a bar of it in a couple of other places as well..da da da deda ...to create some foreshadowing - oops literary reference sorry!
I quite like the drums - being a "haven't a clue" type of drum programmer (Roland 505).
Born to be wild gentlemen, born to be.
Cheers
rayC
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Thakns, man. Snake played a lot of stuff for this, and I tried not to bury it. I think he actually held back for once.... :D
 
Dogman said:
Thakns, man. Snake played a lot of stuff for this, and I tried not to bury it. I think he actually held back for once.... :D
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Haha, Dogman got me there. Yeah I usually just wank it as crazy as I can. This time I actually wrote the solo so I could try some harmony work with the rhythm guitar.

rayc, good thoughts on the foreshadowing... I actually thought about working some of the main melodies from solo in earlier, maybe I'll still try to work that in there.

Thanks everyone for the reviews... the dogs appreciate it :D
 
Hey Dogs......Black Prophecy 666 are getting scared now, they will be phoning you dudes up soon to come on tour with you!

Nice rythym guitars, good to see some restraint in your playing Snake, that is hard to do but will always yield better results!



"BLACK RULES DEATH"
 
DigitalSmigital said:
Killer job Dogs, I really like the end. I thought SnakeD was a drummer? :confused:
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Everybody knows that drummers become guitar players. :D

Kidding!! Where would our sorry asses' be without drummers?!!! :cool:
 
Cool tune, laid back and heavy, good sounds, cool guitar solo, as well as riffin.
I can dig the Raw vox, Is that both of you singing at times?
It sounded like both of you were singing at certain parts of the song.

anyway you`ve got my vote :)
 
Nakatira said:
Cool tune, laid back and heavy, good sounds, cool guitar solo, as well as riffin.
I can dig the Raw vox, Is that both of you singing at times?
It sounded like both of you were singing at certain parts of the song.

anyway you`ve got my vote :)
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Hey, Naka man...yeah we both did some cool vocal like stuff here... :D
Tried to really fill up what was just 5 chords originally....
Thanks man, appreciate the listen and kind words.
Ed
 
Nakatira said:
Cool tune, laid back and heavy, good sounds, cool guitar solo, as well as riffin.
I can dig the Raw vox, Is that both of you singing at times?
It sounded like both of you were singing at certain parts of the song.

anyway you`ve got my vote :)
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Thanks Nakman! :)
Yeah I tried some hardcore Dogman style vocals here and there, but honestly after like two takes my throat was gone :D So hopefully they do the job...
 
SnakeDog5050 said:
Thanks Nakman! :)
Yeah I tried some hardcore Dogman style vocals here and there, but honestly after like two takes my throat was gone :D So hopefully they do the job...
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Dude, I think they add some cool depth to the tune. The original is about twice as long, and very dry. This is actually fun, for a simple tune. I actually did another remix, after learning some tricks. Not a drastic change, but a bit cleaner. I'll get it to ya...
 
digging it dogs.. typing while i listen.. really like the riff and vibe of the song. i like the vocals, makes me miss my hardcore/screaming days. ill have to jump in on a collab with someone someday get my scream on.. really like this im listening again now.. love the guitar solo .. quality wise sounds really sound to me.. very cool, love the song guys

take care
gary
 
gbav said:
digging it dogs.. typing while i listen.. really like the riff and vibe of the song. i like the vocals, makes me miss my hardcore/screaming days. ill have to jump in on a collab with someone someday get my scream on.. really like this im listening again now.. love the guitar solo .. quality wise sounds really sound to me.. very cool, love the song guys

take care
gary
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Thanks, Gary. I had a cold, and the vox came out that way.... :D Guess I need a cold more often.
I know I 'd work on a collab with ya, if I have anything you might need.....
Ed
 
hey no problem man, ive listened a few times really like this one.. yeah id collab i don't think i have too much to offer other than stressed out vocals though haha
 
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