Forever Be Together | Looking for feedback | Progressive House

[dgrswe]

Alright! So i've finished another track and i think it turned out pretty good! Please give me some honest feedback! it helps a lot

 

[Manslick]

Very nicely arranged.
Subtle tones work well like at the halfway point.
Good use of backward noize.
assuming you are lovely, doing this live will kill.

 

[dobro]

You don't even have to be lovely. You could be an ugly moral midget with bad habits, but if you did this live, they'd forgive you. It's really good. That shift at 2.13 shouldn't work, but it's great. Good work.

 

[dgrswe]

You don't even have to be lovely. You could be an ugly moral midget with bad habits, but if you did this live, they'd forgive you. It's really good. That shift at 2.13 shouldn't work, but it's great. Good work.

Thanks you so much!!

 

[dgrswe]

Very nicely arranged.
Subtle tones work well like at the halfway point.
Good use of backward noize.
assuming you are lovely, doing this live will kill.

Thank you so much! I really hope i'll get at the point when i can perform this live! But its probably still a long way to go

 

[dobro]

What would stop you from being able to do this one live? Why couldn't you do it live tomorrow, for instance?

 

[dgrswe]

What would stop you from being able to do this one live? Why couldn't you do it live tomorrow, for instance?

im 13 lol

 

[dobro]

13? So... your mom organizes a play date with the other moms and you do your tune and everybody's home by dinnertime?

... and I thought *I* had problems to deal with.

Good tune.