Ey wat u guys think about this incomplete mix

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Strictly quality of sounds? 4/10. The bass sounds like a cheap Dre ripoff. The high pitched shit is completely annoying. Drums are average, nothing to get excited about.

Or do you mean overall impression? 3/10. The rap is weak. The song overall is very boring.
 
Wow i knew from the way you typed this song would probably be something weird. I'm going to have to agree, that high pitched synth thing( WHATEVER IT IS) is very annoying. And it also seems as if you were improvising the lyrics.
 
The snare sounds like it's from "The Message" - the beat is very built in beatbox from a Casio three octave keyboard Circa 1982.
The bass distorts or farts & doesn't support the melody at all. Are they in the same key?
The synths merely distract, sorry - some bits are old Dr Who retro but they all end up being in the same freq band with little or no variation of tone or sequence.
Your vocals aren't very clearly recorded - there's too much conflict with the bass - you'll need to do some EQ carving to make them sit better.
I also have to admit that apart from the gangster refrain I didn't catch any of the lyrics so the rhymes may or may not be rhymes.
Summary: the mix is incomplete.
 
D@m datz sum gangsta shit my nigga



But seriously, it sounds like there was a wet blanket in between you and the mic.
 
I thought the vocal performance was good.

I thought that the higher pitched synth part was a little harsh and took away from the vocals.

I thought the vocals were a little low in the mix and lacked a lot of upper mids and highs.

There is a little lower-pitched synth sound that is distorted just a bit. It moves with the vocal in quite a few spots. The distortion really competes with the vocal.
 
Same old poor quality shit that every other rapper is spamming all over the Internet. It would be really cool if there was an engineer involved who knew what they were doing.
 
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