English rhyming utility

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Re: BluesMeister Rises To The Bait...

BluesMeister said:
You're finding rhyming words from differening verses in the song!
Well, I did say the rhyming "pattern" was a little unusual. :D

Didn't you pick up on it? Third line, first verse. Third line, bridge. Second line, fourth verse.

What makes it real tricky is the skip pattern in verses two and three. :)

Bet it can't find a rhyme for Saginaw!
What's wrong with Cole Slaw?

We ate the pies and some cole slaw,
My stomach hurt from Ann Arbor to Saginaw.

I'll work on it a little more.
 
Re: Re: BluesMeister Rises To The Bait...

dachay2tnr said:
I'll work on it a little more.
Please don't! It's brilliant! :D
 
Dachay Finds A Rhyme For Saginaw

dachay2tnr said:
We ate the pies and some cole slaw,
My stomach hurt from Ann Arbor to Saginaw.
Now there's a lyric I can relate to Dachay! It has humour, it has pathos, it has symbolism. I love the way the main character bares his soul.

He could just as easily be singing about my own worthless life. The tears are rolling down my cheeks. I feel his pain.

This is a masterpiece! Have you considered adapting it as a screen play? I can see Al Pacino in the main role with perhaps a cameo appearance from Arnold Schwartzenegger. It'll be a box office smash. Who will you get to do the soundtrack?

Oh, of course! You will...

Ladies and gentlemen, this is a GREAT moment in the history of HomeReccers! :D

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BluesMeister
 
Does that mean... we'll do it again... ?

Grouphug ?

...for a rhyme ?

Aaah, who cares for what... lets do it... :)




...am I the only one who watches the pattern here ? the more we do grouphug, the more another pointless -but entertaining- thread born after... :D
 
Making words rhyme is a tuff thing to do. I've always had trouble, but I have done a few. If the ideas would just come, I wouldn't feel so dumb, but I can't make it fly, so why even try? Finally, it hit me; some of the best songs I've heard, are pure instrumental, they ain't got no words! So, that's what I write, and it's the easy way out. But you guys know by now, that's what I'm all about!!!!

Oh, to find the perfect rhyme!!! Why must it be so elusive???

ed:D
 
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