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RAMI
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Hey fuckers and fuckettes,
Here's a new one I need ears for. Finished it last night. As always, the same disclaimer :"I probably should have let it sit before posting, etc......".
I'm not sure if the octave vocals woks in the verses. I'm not sure if the other vocal part fits, etc...I have a few choices and I chose to approach it this way. But I might go back and re-track the vocals if what I'm doing doesn't quite work. I hate my own voice, like most other people hate theirs, so I'm never sure how well they do and don't work.
Thanx in advance for any advice and comments.
ECLIPSE OF MY MIND
Eclipse of My Mind (words and music by RAMI)
Lucy climbed a mountain kissed the sky with diamonds falling
Over me again tripping on a cloud and now I feel I'm
Coming down coming down like a war that's over
Jumping off a mountain and I flew again
Truth is nothing ever will be true again
Walking wide asleep before I woke up from this total eclipse of my mind
Leave me or believe me dreamed the war of all the worlds is falling
Over me again sweating blood and tears and now I feel I'm
Coming down coming down feel the worst is over
Flying off a mountain and I'm free again
So unreal that nothing will be real again
Walking wide asleep before I woke up from this total eclipse of my mind
Flying off a mountain and I'm free again
So unreal that nothing will be real again
I think I thought I knew before I woke up from this total eclipse of my mind
Here's a new one I need ears for. Finished it last night. As always, the same disclaimer :"I probably should have let it sit before posting, etc......".
I'm not sure if the octave vocals woks in the verses. I'm not sure if the other vocal part fits, etc...I have a few choices and I chose to approach it this way. But I might go back and re-track the vocals if what I'm doing doesn't quite work. I hate my own voice, like most other people hate theirs, so I'm never sure how well they do and don't work.
Thanx in advance for any advice and comments.
ECLIPSE OF MY MIND
Eclipse of My Mind (words and music by RAMI)
Lucy climbed a mountain kissed the sky with diamonds falling
Over me again tripping on a cloud and now I feel I'm
Coming down coming down like a war that's over
Jumping off a mountain and I flew again
Truth is nothing ever will be true again
Walking wide asleep before I woke up from this total eclipse of my mind
Leave me or believe me dreamed the war of all the worlds is falling
Over me again sweating blood and tears and now I feel I'm
Coming down coming down feel the worst is over
Flying off a mountain and I'm free again
So unreal that nothing will be real again
Walking wide asleep before I woke up from this total eclipse of my mind
Flying off a mountain and I'm free again
So unreal that nothing will be real again
I think I thought I knew before I woke up from this total eclipse of my mind
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