ha!ha! you suck at uploading. The audio cuts out at a around a minute and a half.
Anyway, that may be youtube getting the audio length wrong...
"another place, where the faces are so cold. Drive all night" sounds out of pitch to me. And there are some other pitch issues in my opinion.
You may wish to make the backing track a touch louder. And if youtube is getting the audio length wrong, you may wish to use soundcloud or vocaroo, and post just the audio, instead of video.
Keep at it. Sky's the limit.
So you dont think my voice sounds unbearable to listen to? thanks