So, my pushy-huggy ways did work.
I haven't been around long, so comments regarding this are well founded.
Regarding my song, this is what I've been waiting for. Yes, the midi stuff is boring. I'm really just an acoustic guitarist, singer ad songwriter. And what this means is that all my live performances are just that. The 1-2-3-4 chord structure just seemed to work in this song. I was hoping that the story and melody kept it interesting, but it's probably worth my while looking at injecting some variation. Stereo guitars: hey, I'm new to this stuff and it's just something I tried to fill out the space. Too much in this case.
I live in country Victoria - exactly in the middle of the bush. My closest neighbour is about 500 metres away, but currently lives in LA (USA), so that's even further, I think.
Thanks for your comments!