Critique My Tune

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This is a demo tune that I've been working on, nothing fancy and not keeper takes. Just one time through tracks I threw together. I'm experimenting with some new techniques and would like some input. I've got lyrics for this song but haven't laid them down yet. Please tell me what you think as far as instrument tone, the rough mix etc. Thanks

http://www.talkingrockranchks.com/demopage
 
Pretty cool song. I think the mix sounded pretty darn good. I like the snare sound and the cymbals sounded nice. I'm assuming they were some kind of samples? The toms sounded a little cheesy, IMO. :D

I really think you need another part in there. Some kind of bridge/interlude thing. It got a little monotonous and it's under 2 minutes. Obviously some vocals would make it more interesting, but I think the arrangement would benefit from going in a different direction for at least a few bars.

I'd like to hear it with some vox.

Cheers!
 
Yeah, the toms are samples and they're the best I've got right now. I haven't been able to afford anything better yet. This is actually a 4-1/2 minute song. There are other parts, that was just the first verse and chorus. I didn't see the need in posting an entire song with no vocals etc. Thanks for the input.
 
....oh won't you please take me home? Sorry. Couldn't help myself. The mix sounds good.
 
HA! You know, I never even realized that. Trust me, with the lyrics it sounds nothing like GNR....better to sound similar to Paradise City than My Shirona I guess.
 
hueseph said:
....oh won't you please take me home? Sorry. Couldn't help myself. The mix sounds good.
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HAHA that was my first thought too.. I'm not really into the snare sound, a bit to dry for my taste, but other than that the mix sound good to my ears..
 
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